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【嬿郅原创】念奴娇·旷世萧瑟

2016-04-13 03:12:15| 分类：嬿郅古体词作 | 标签： |举报 |字号大中小订阅

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念奴娇·旷世萧瑟

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暮春缟夜，拥清风，独品旷世萧瑟。一地相思千盏泪，碎了残词湘帙。寂寥梧桐，身孤影孑，素靥凝霜色。流云魂灺，魄枕凄冷欢伯。跌跌撞撞人生，诗词伴我，把紫阡参默。自古红颜多薄命，难度七灾八厄。把酒疏星，倚觞作别，看岁华更秩。本为呓语，管他音律平仄。

词林正韵·第十七部

又名大江东去、酹江月、赤壁词、百字令等。双调100字，上下片各十句四仄韵。

⊙□⊙◇，◇□⊙，⊙◇⊙⊙□◆。⊙◇⊙□□◇◇，⊙◇⊙□⊙◆。⊙◇□□，⊙□⊙◇。⊙◇□□◆。⊙□⊙◇，⊙⊙□◇⊙◆。 ⊙◇⊙◇□□，⊙□⊙◇，⊙⊙□⊙◆。⊙◇⊙□□◇◇，⊙◇⊙□□◆。⊙◇□□，⊙□⊙◇，⊙◇□□◆。⊙□⊙◇，⊙□□◇□◆。

(此调变体很多，上下片第二、三句的句式可为上五下四，第四、五句亦可为四，三、六)

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